You’re so Amazing

Alex savagely kissed Margot’s lush rosy lips; He brushed the corner of her lips with his and then his teeth tugged at her lower lip. Every nerve in her body surged to life as she shivered from the sensation of his soft lips against hers. Her nipples tingled and became as hard as pebbles, she felt damp as the muscles in her vagina clenched. She was on fire. She needed Alex more than she needed her next breath. When Alex tried to end the kiss, Margot moved forward, grabbing the back of his head and drawing him in for another kiss. Alex chuckled against her lips.

“Do you want to come in for coffee?” She asked him when she finally came back up for air.

“If coffee is code for sex, then yes, I wanna come in for coffee,” Alex said. Margo laughed as her nervousness melted away.

“This is happening.” she thought to herself. 

She opened the door and allowed Alex to step into her apartment; his presence in her apartment was wreaking havoc on her senses. She took the time to study Alex’s massive form. She watched as he strolled into the living room and sat on her sofa. His powerful body made the entire room look so much smaller. “How do you take your coffee?” she asked him.

“Margot, come and sit beside me. You know I don’t bite,” he said. “No need for the pretense!” 

Margot sighed. 

“Fine” she mumbled as she sat down in the far corner of the couch. Alex moved over until Margot could hardly tell where she stopped and he began. She opened her mouth to say something, but he silenced her with another of his intoxicating kisses. Margot lost her breath and no matter how many breaths she took there was never enough air in her lungs. She surrendered to him without hesitation. Alex gathered up her little frame onto his lap and continued his assault on her senses. Between kisses, he grabbed her ass and squeezed it hard. He slipped his hand into the waist of her jeans and grabbed her bare ass.

Margot had never been more aware of herself as a woman than at this moment. He used the roughness of her jeans to play against her clit as he grabbed her hips and rubbed her pelvis against the heaviness of his erection. Alex kissed along her neck and throat, He assaulted her nerves from every direction until her entire body was a full-blown volcano. Margo leaped off his lap, in a dizzying effort to get out her jeans. He watched through a lust-filled gaze and chuckled at her antics. When she finally wiggled out of her jeans, Alex dragged her back into his lap.  He kissed her neck and nonchalantly made his way down to her breast. As he massaged her two golden globes Margo threw her head back and moaned out in ecstasy. His mouth instantly replaced his hand. Alex traced circles around the dark areolas, sending her into a frenzy of emotions. As gentle as Alex was, it threw Margo into a memory so deep she couldn’t escape. Images of that first night with her husband flashed before her eyes. She screamed out for Alex to stop.

“Are you okay?” he asked. “Margo, talk to me.”

“Water, I need water,” Margo said. She pushed Alex away and made her way to the kitchen.

“Did I do something wrong?” Alex Asked.

Margot took big gulps of water. “You did nothing. I just have issues and if you wanted to go, I totally understand.”

She watched as his impressive cock stand died. She waited for Alex to pack his stuff, but he walked into the kitchen with just his jeans on.  He swung her around and kissed the back of her neck. 

“Tell me what you like!” he demanded.

“I don’t know,” replied Margot.


“I..I… I am not like you. I am not a sexual person.”

“Again, bullshit, you eye fucked me in that supermarket the first time you saw me. You knew exactly what you wanted that day, now tell me!”

Margot gasped for air again. No one had ever asked her what she wanted before. The feeling was new and intoxicating. But she didn’t know what to say. Alex stared at her as if he was looking into her soul. What did this man want from her? She had no idea what to say. Sex was always a dirty activity, done in the dark for a few minutes with her husband. She dug hard and remembered what she wanted a moment ago as she was grinding on him. She finally said. “I want you to prop me up on the counter and eat me out like I was your last meal.”

His slow, sexy grin sent chills up her back as he scooped her up in his big burly arms and placed her on the counter. He pried her legs open. She tried to snap them back shut, but Alex was too strong. She relaxed and let him have his way. She threw her head back and closed her eyes.

“Don’t close your eyes, Margot. Look at me!” he said. 

He stared in her eyes as he kissed a trail down to her freshly shaved honey pot. Alex’s stare intensified as he kissed her inner thighs and breathed her womanly essence in. She watched him as her breath got caught. She did her best to relax, but her need and hunger for him grew stronger. His tongue swiped over her honey nub, her entire body came alive again as a flame bright hot seared through her. One sweep of his tongue had left her drenched. The walls of her pussy clenched. He used his tongue to beat against her clit, stroking and caressing it. His tongue was gentle at first, then rough, then stabbing deep to bring her closer to that elusive feeling. He devoured her pussy like it was his last meal. She screamed out in ecstasy. She tossed her head back and forth, gripping the back of his head and digging her nails in. He reached for a nipple and squeezed. He continued feasting on the thick meaty folds of her vagina. He rubbed her clit as his tongue played peek-a-boo inside her vagina, her legs shook out of control. The tension coiled tighter deep inside until it spilled out and shattered Margot senses into a million pieces.Her orgasm was so intense it took every drop of energy she had. She laid on the counter spent and drenched in her own juices.

Alex came up for air: he reached into his pocket and took a condom and shimmered out of his jeans and boxers. He rolled the condom on his hard, stiff cock. Before Margot could blink she was face down on the counter and Alex was entering her from behind with a delicious slowness. Her slick folds were wet and ready for every sweet inch of him. His first stroke was tentative and soft, but as he continued, they became harder and more demanding. He drilled into her and grabbed her hair and wrapped around his fist as he continued to slap his colossal body into hers. The only noise now was the heavy breathing and moaning of the two lovers. He reached for her clit and rubbed it as he pounded into her, and she enjoyed every moment. A hard dick was something her dearly departed husband rarely had to give. Alex tense up and increased his speed, and Margot knew instantly that he was coming. His stroke became more intense as he grabbed her shoulders then her neck and squeezed. Another orgasm started to build up in her.

“Oh fuck” she exclaimed “I am coming.” 

Alex grunted as his body tensed up and stars formed behind his closed eyes. He grunted again as he spread his semen into the condom.

Margot closed her eyes and allowed a man to pamper her as he cleaned her up. She thought he would get dressed and leave, instead he led her to the bedroom.

“It’s going to be a long night.” she thought to herself.

Published by nlamonth

I am a budding writer I am English Teacher that is currently jobless. So i am using my free time to create a world of fiction where I can be me

18 thoughts on “You’re so Amazing

  1. This was really refreshing to read. It also gave me anxieties as what next is to come (No pun intended of course). Both characters seem to be quite dominant sexually and knowing what they want. I mostly like that about Margo. I liked the hint of comedic element that popped up every now and then, and it made the scenes feel surreal. Great piece! Looking for next week’s piece ❤️

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    1. I love it. The way you describe it well…. i felt like i was in Margot show. As always you know you did that. Amazing….. waiting to see what happens next.

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  2. The subtle switches between first and third person was intense. It gave the idea of an out of body experience and emphasized a level of natural chemistry between the opposite sex. Of course he was the dominant. Your choices of words however suggested he’s some kind of sexual predator with a conscience. He knew what she wanted and damn sure knew what he wanted but played it to not make her feel like a prey as much as she was. While she wanted to be taken advantage he made sure she knew he knew she wanted to and he and acted accordingly. Well played.


      1. With not much back story, he was aware of her eye fucking him from the supermarket. That’s a show of self awareness. When she stopped because of the flashbacks. He stopped as well and gave her room to breathe. When he continued however he made her give into him by “forcing” her legs apart. The continous use of the word “assault” didn’t add to his charm either.


        1. Ok but the supermarket scene was in the story so the audience is aware that she was indeed doing that. Forcing her legs apartment was just helping her to be less afraid of going after what she wanted. Assault is a strong verb to show how much he was affecting her. If she was uncomfortable with any of it he would’ve stopped


  3. Enjoyed this. I love how you showed her vulnerability, how past trauma/past experiences can impact someone even when they least expect it from the slightest of triggers. Both seem to be dominant but just that Margot has suppressed her dominance because of those past experiences. Can’t wait to see what happens as she’s made to open up and show who she really is.

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